Hi everyone This is my first ever post here and I am very nervous about your expert opinion. Feel free to tear me apart

Ok so my little guy is having trouble deciding whether to sell his old friend and buy a new "terminator" or not. Some objects in his quite messy garage have split opinion about the whole thing. I hope it is all legible. Feel free to leave your comments.

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Orsolya Orbán

@gary-wilkinson I really like the idea

@gary-wilkinson I really like the idea

Ok so my little guy is having trouble deciding whether to sell his old friend and buy a new "terminator" or not. Some objects in his quite messy garage have split opinion about the whole thing. I hope it is all legible. Feel free to leave your comments.

SVS @orsi
Orsolya Orbán

I really do like the bright colors and the style. Please don't be offended by my opinion on the illustration, my intention is to be helpful with every word I am saying.

1. The old lady is very cute, however I only realized she's an old lady after reading your description about the character. Maybe her freckles make her look younger. Also, it took me a few seconds to realize that she has glasses on her nose. I would maybe change the color of her dress as it is very similar to the color of the grass (maybe I am wrong). The red apron gets your attention instantly, I love it.
2. The focal point of the image is the old lady, so I would think that she is the main character in this scene, not the animals. Both of them are cute, however I think that the deer is too big and dark to be occupying the biggest part of the illustration. Since it is in the shadows and doesn't face the audience I would have said that he is a secondary character. I may also be wrong, as I didn't see the text.
   Overall, I love it and would buy a book with that style

@heathertbl I really like the idea of the two eating popsicles and the details and glow on the head of the octopus. Lovely!

@bichonbistro thank you so much for your lovely comment It's already a win for me to have been able to create something that brings you back to look at it again

@smceccarelli Awwww adorable!

Hi everyone This is my first ever post here and I am very nervous about your expert opinion. Feel free to tear me apart