@smceccarelli Thank you o much for your comments! I definitely agree that I need to go back through and maybe revisit some of the pages to make sure the illustrations are varying up more throughout the book. I'm not particularly happy with the second page in particular.
I laid out the whole book and there are some pages that aren't full splash pages, but they're not as frequent for sure.
@Chip-Valecek Working with your kids is a blast! I definitely had to go back in and do some rewrites though, because the idea was really interesting, but there were story edits that needed some working out.