Hello, SVS and community! I would appreciate any and all critique on this. Anything from composition to suggestions on color are welcome! (It was created in Procreate.) Also, I'm including beneath the image a little story that may go with the illustration.
"Rays of sunshine spilled like shattered crystals as Katy entered the sitting room. Morning doves creamed the stillness with the comforting warmth of song. The light tap, tapping of branches agains the window panes threaded into the morning sounds of breakfast happening just downstairs.
Katy loved the sunshine. In fact, she enjoyed almost anything and everything about life that was truly beautiful. She moved forward noiselessly and pressed her hands against the shining window.
Dozens of pedestrians passed the still figure, oblivious of her presence but yards above. Several children dashed down the street chasing after a dog, their squeals softening through the barrier of glass.
Birds began a morning chorus of song, while a street musician made happy, playful tunes on his pipe organ.
The world had so much beauty to Katy. Everyday she hoped to breathe a little more in.
It really didn't matter that she couldn't see."