Christina this looks so lively! You are doing great I bet those boys will love it!

Just watched it and learned a lot by seeing the mistakes I made pointed out in the other pieces. I think it went really well. Thanks guys. On to "love."

I couldn't stay up for it at 11pm EST (I'm in bed at nine - got to be up early for my husband and early-rising three year old) Plus, i'm getting old, or at least it feels that way. Hope to see the video on YouTube soon - oh, there it is now. Gotta go!

I do like the muted, soft colors. However, Papa mouse's shirt colors are very similar to the floor. Perhaps, using a pink for the floor (like the inside of the mouses' ears) would be good. This would help Papa mouse stand out and wouldn't add a new color to your work. A bit of gradiation should help give the flooring depth. Also, it's hard to read Papa mouse's right hand as it has lost the finger definition from your sketch. I love the clock (super cute idea to show the time progression through book plus Hickory Dickory Dock!) but one hand is pointing at 12 but the other hand is just off 7 - it should be pointed directly at 7 since the other hand is at 12.

@Kevin-Longueil Thanks Kevin. Ordered the Pencil in November so I've had it for about a week now. Really like using it. Second best purchase of 2015 behind the iPad Pro for me. I'm sure you'll get lots of use out of it.

@Ace-Connell Glad it's not just me. This is my first time on the forum and I'm using my iPad Pro and screaming "WHY IS EVERYTHING SO SMALL!"
BTW I'm really enjoying the forum and everyone's art and advise. I don't know Nigel but I really like your sketch of him.

I really like this concept and it turned out great. Thanks for sharing!

Beautiful and dark. Good job.

Dulcie, This is beautiful! I think your light sources look realistic and soft and I could fall into that painterly style. Thanks for sharing!