Welcome! This is very cool and I look forward to seeing more from you. You are obviously a great draftsman. I love the way you have them posed, but one thing I’m not so sure about is the right character’s hand behind the other character’s head. It’s kind of tangenty ... and a little bit distracting to me. I’m not sure if there is a better place to put it because I really like the interplay you have going between them where they have gotten crossed up in the rigging, but maybe see if there is a better option. Great work so far!

I watched this video today and it was enlightening. I don’t know what my style rules are. Maybe that’s why I feel like I don’t have a distinctive style? Everyone says that I do, but I don’t see it. I was excited to see that two of the illustrators he discusses in the video (Wylie Beckert and Cory Godbey) are in my Dream Portfolio, but maybe they shouldn’t be because I don’t have lots of flowing lines in my work.

Aw, thank you so much @JennyJones! I appreciate it.

Looking great. Thanks for sharing your process. Love the character and the one in the side mirror is a nice touch.

@whitney-simms I thought I was the only one who doesn’t do left turns. Me, you and UPS.

@eli Thanks so much for your comments!

Thanks for your help! @chip-valecek

Here it is with some changes.

Oh no! So sorry that happened. On the bright side anytime I’m forced to do anything over against my will it turns out better the second time. I hope that happens for you!

@rcartwright true. I had not intended it to be a hug originally, but I might change it now that it has been brought into question. Thank you!