Here is my entry. I'd say FROZEN NOON is turning into a South Pole spaghetti western take on Hansel and Gretel. Unfortunately for this cowboy, he's in the story to help establish my yeti's "ordinary world."
Good luck, everyone!
Aspiring author/illustrator (PB/CB/MG) of adventure stories.
@JoshSchouwstra “What makes this a fairy tale inn?” Yes. Thank you. That nails why I think the life was gone. There’s no “icing” on my last post – there’s going to be an abandoned feel to it – but its definitely missing its fairy tale core to start. Thank you for clearly saying the words that finally let’s me accurately put down the tack for why this wasn’t working.
And thank you. Definitely getting back to work with the pencil in the sketchbook.