Hello! This is my first post here. I am working on my portfolio for children's book and I would love to see your opinion on this work in progress. I am open for suggestions and criticism.
Here are some of the questions that I have in my mind:
How effective is the composition? is it balanced? Which one is the most pleasant to the eye?
Do you prefer the girl being smaller or bigger on the page?
Do you think the colors are boring or are they okay?
Should I change the gesture of the girl so that her arms aren't mirroring or it's fine just as she is?
Is it too flat? do you think the illustration would look better if I apply more linear perspective?