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@Kevin-Longueil thanks! That looks like a lot of fun. I don't have an iPad, but I will look for a similar program for the computer.

I like anthros pushed more human, everyone is different. I agree, that the pole needs a bend. Perhaps bring the reel, and arm down a bit, to angle the pole up, but have the bend as well, showing the things attached have some weight. The pot feels like an afterthought, maybe redesign those elements. There is also a tangent where the rod and hat brim meet. The hat and map have been given more detail than everything else, maybe some more detail in the clothes, or less in the hat/map? I'm liking the direction it's going so far. Just thoughts.

Congratulations! Well done, you! Here's a round of applause:

I like the style! I wonder if it would help the composition to move the sandbox under the window and move the snowman and child to the right, then crop the right to eliminate empty space. I might even increase the height of the snowmsn then to rise a little above the fence. I know that might be too much to change at this point.

The line work is done! Please let me know what you think.

@KaraDaniel thanks...I didnt notice that. I will make that part of the bag curl up a bit more so it doesn't touch. I dont think coloring would help...its a clear plastic bag.

Great colour pallette!

Hi, This is my assignment for the PROPS workshop. It is almost finished. Just adding shading and highlights. Thanks to those who commented on my sketch. Please let me know what you think! Those who have watched the videos for this course, please let me know if you think it works with the assignment. Thank you!

Theres a few things you can do to connect the lamp and table. I think the shape language can he improved. The lamp is nice and tall and the table/desk looks small comparatively, you can extend the legs more. Also the base of the lamp and the lamp shade are nice solid bold shapes. Using the same mind of thicker shapes in the table legs might help too. Like a bigger cube for the feets. Or a taller cylinder for the center part of the legs. Relate the shapes of each prop to your main prop (i.e. the lamp).

Thanks. I will watch and see if it comes back up.

Thank you everyone. I was going for silly bunnies playing a dangerous game. I asked my husband... but he wasn't helpful!