As always great seeing everyone's work
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Hello! Very cool to see everyone prepping for next month. Can't wait to see y'alls work
I'm committing myself to Inktober this year woo! Last year was the first I tried and I only did a few fanart pieces to go along with a topic. This year I'll be focusing on creating my own content/design choice.
I recently decided to go down the children's book illustrator path and am reaquainting myself with the elements and principles of design.
Hopefully along the way I can find a chosen style. But I'll use the coming month as a back-to basics-study so most of it will be experiments. I wrote down some notes to look at if I get stuck. Just a board of related subjects but it's been helping plan a few upcoming topics by playing mix and match
I think #1. As Art of B said above it has a better silhouette. The poses of the characters and the bike are much more defined, whereas #2 it has more going on.
If you go with #2 perhaps have the bear look at the boy so that all our eyes are drawn to him and give a little space between him and the bear
#3 is fun but yes they are rather close to the tree
I look forward to seeing your progress, nice work
Haha! Does the monster's collar say "Munch"? Hilarious touch.
I agree with Chip the only thing I wasn't certain about was the boy holding the toe/talon. I see it a bit more defined in the sketch. Perhaps adjust it so the shape is more obvious?
Amazing work! Looking forward to your progress