I'm new to SVS, working on the figure. Camping with my wife, kids and friends!
@Kuarahy okay, take everything I say with a grain of salt, I am a total beginner when it comes to illustration, the woman looks very good, the pot she is watering looks to me like it is on the same plane as the boy.... could you tuck that behind the foot? and the cactus almost looks like a foreground element and he is going to fall behind it in the last sketch, do you think it would look better if it the cactus was smaller, or maybe just to be on the page a little more? Also, Great Job! it is looking very nice and telling a great story! keep it up, you all are very inspiring to me!
I really like this last sketch, I did like how his leg overlapped the woman in the background a bit for some depth in the first sketch, I think in the final you could possibly blur her out, and throw a cool color on her. Great start!