I like number 4 because of the perspective and the way that the ponytail is more important. My only suggestion is about the title, I feel that there is not enough space between the character and the title.

Hello everyone,

This is my entry for the month. There is a chicken playing hide and seek, can you find where the other 16 chickens are? Some of them are well hidden but others maybe are a little distracted.

@jason-kilthau Thank you

I also like your illustration, in special the medieval details.

Hello everyone,

Here is my entry and my first participation in a contest here. I wanted to challenge myself with this illustration and it was by drawing more human-like animals. I normally draw humans so I decided to try that instead.

Thank you so much @lei @smceccarelli @TessaW for your comments. It helped me a lot to improve my website.

These few days I experimented based on your suggestions and tried having different sections and also removing images. I ended with a version that I think looks much better and not too overwhelming. I also moved some images to other sections and organized it better.

Hi,

I think that the expression of the police look more like he is tired. Maybe change a little the eyes and also the hands. Try that the police want to reach the squirrel or something like that.

@smceccarelli Thank you for you comment. I have been trying to be represented by an agency but I have not had any luck. Maybe I have to be more present in social media or find how to get more exposure.

I followed your advice and took out some illustrations that I felt were too old or weren´t necesary. I feel that it did help, the gallery doesn´t look too saturated. Maybe I will also take out a few more.

@severin-baschung I love the color of the mushroom and the effect of light.

Hi everyone,

I would like to ask for your opinion and critiques again. Some days ago I asked it was ok to illustrate using diverse techiniques and how to show that in my portfolio. I tried to have different sections based on each technique but most of my illustrations are mixed media and I also feel that I have ended with too many sections, in my opinion. So I decided to do a big gallery on the first page. I also added some sections but I am not sure if it is ok.

I would like to know what you think, and also I would like to know if there is something that I could improve. I have been trying to find more opportunities in the children's book industry, but it is being somewhat difficult, so I would really appreciate any opinion or critique.

https://www.flordevitaz.com

Final version