@burvantill Thank, you...You're rigth about that. Before i post something i'll write critiques for a bit.

OH dude, i really like your lines. I wonder who are your influences, somehow it reminds me the work of quino.
Keep it going.

Hi there, i'm really interested in gesture drawing and mastering perspective. It's a really good idea to make study groups. So you can also learn from others points of view.

Hello!
Somehow i liked more the first sketch that you uploaded, but reading your worries about composition and how to deal whit perspective make me think that maybe you should give another aproach to give deepness to the picture. What you did rigth in the sketch was giving focus making contrast in size, so i think it's better to you to focus on diferents planes more than an strict perspertive. Like in first plane is the two (mother and child), in second the rest of them and in third the moon and the sky (giving them them hierarchy respectively)...also think of the sentence as an element too, so you could complement the comp whit it.
Greetings.

@Kris I will dude.

@burvantill Thank, you...You're rigth about that. Before i post something i'll write critiques for a bit.

OH dude, i really like your lines. I wonder who are your influences, somehow it reminds me the work of quino.
Keep it going.

Hi again!
I was looking for forums to get some feedback and end up here. But where are my modals, let me introduce myself.
I'm somehow an illustrator, or at least i want to, i have a degree on architecture so desing and image are my interest more than the architecture itself, so here i am.
I'm sure i'll find here good conversations...
Sooooooo....how this forum works? i'm also interested in the SVS courses so maybe i'll take some...
Anyways, i'm going to read some posts... see ya in there