Posts made by cbrocke

This looks great @saciia_ ! I wonder if making the boy smaller might add a bit more interest. If you want to try that I would suggest thickening the tree beside him to keep the visual balance. It looks great as is though. This style really suits the book. Good work!

Your love of these flowers really comes through! The shapes of the bluebells are beautiful! keep up the good work.

I'm interested in joining as well. I'm guilty of binge watching most of the classes. I need to slow down and make sure I do the exercises. I think going through a class as a group is a great idea Susan! Thank you for initiating this.

This looks great! Love it!

Thank you @theprairiefox for your critique! The smaller character is actually supposed to be a girl and the taller one a boy. it is supposed to be a romantic gesture of him kissing her hand. Your critique helped me realize that I am not communicating that very well. I will make changes to hopefully make it more obvious.

I agree, the second one conveys that seagull is intentionally giving a gift. The first one with the goofy eyes looks like he is just holding the fish. You can't tell what he is thinking.
The drawings look great! I'm excited to see what it will look like in color!

This looks great! Good job with the complicated environment!

This is looking great! I've learned a lot by seeing your process to get to this point!

Thank you inkandsplatter for your critique! I took your advice and removed the heart. Here is the second try. I worked on emphasizing the pose more and getting rid of some of the tangents. I am worried that the characters do not look like they are standing on the same plane. Let me know what you think! )

I like the darker one the best. Nice color balance!

Happy Valentine's Day everyone! I am new to the forums and I thought I would start by showing my WIP for this month's art challenge. I call it S'more Amore. Let me know what I could do to improve this drawing. I am going for cute and simple.