Topics created by Bob Szesnat

@cory-shaw Thanks, Cory. Good point on the Father's point of view. I tend to do that when I write and create it's in a vacuum. In my brain, Its the sweetest nicest thing and I don't think "Oh if a Dad read it to his daughter he might not want his kid think she looks funny" I really should look and ask before I post. Thanks for the input it will help me grow.

Thanks for your input guys

@bob-szesnat Hi, looking cool:-) If you don't mind, i might suggest one more change. Perhaps you could try to take texture off the sky, so its doesn't mix with the rest.

Here is my update. I decided to change the perspective to focus on the more important pieces. I went with blocking in with paint rather than lines so that I could work on my values. Thanks folks for your help.

@Jason-Kellogg Thanks. I'm still trying to sort it out. Put in images, that kind of thing. Happy you liked it.

@evilrobot Thanks for bring that up. I was unsure too, if the conveyor belt is a tool or not, as it is described in the text? In the first one she is holding the box and the belt with the bottles are flying out. Maybe if she was reaching in and yanking it out. Unsure if that would be confusing or not? Thanks for your input.

Yea I am defiantly finding i'm getting more expression with the more realistic eyes. I don't find them that creepy but I see how people could see them as round black voids of utter nothingness, wow now i'm freaking myself out. HaHa! Others find them adorable and for things like logos and symbols they work great. Thanks for replying @Ace Connell.