Amazing!! This is so helpful to me! I completely see it now and how the improvement works so much better. I can't wait to take this class ! The idea was to have her looking up at the mountains but if a viewer has to ask then I have not executed this correctly. I want my viewers to be able to see and feel what my character is doing. Thank you ,thank you ,thank you!

I have been creating this story for some time now and I wanted to share some images with you all. Although the name has changed several times, I am almost there!!

Hi there,

If you are still reviewing work, I would love this one to be done! Thanks!!

@smceccarelli Oh I love this ... The bear with the hat is my absolute favorite.. I really love the different perspectives you have going on.

I have been creating this story for some time now and I wanted to share some images with you all. Although the name has changed several times, I am almost there!!

Amazing!! This is so helpful to me! I completely see it now and how the improvement works so much better. I can't wait to take this class ! The idea was to have her looking up at the mountains but if a viewer has to ask then I have not executed this correctly. I want my viewers to be able to see and feel what my character is doing. Thank you ,thank you ,thank you!

Lee,

THANK YOU !!! so much for your feedback. I have a couple of questions. When you say character design what and unatural poses,which image are you looking at? The composition I always struggle with ,what suggestions would you make to improve these images composition wise? Do you feel my characters are too dull? Do they need more expressive faces? Thanks again.

Araina

Hi Everyone!! i am looking for some critques to my artwork. I am just about ready to start sending out postcards and I feel my art has really grown. Any feedback is appreciated!