Id love some feedback on this piece i just finished up! Mostly wondering how well the concept reads but anything you notice about colors/rendering etc please let me know as well! Thanks so much!

Here is my entry! Good luck everyone there are some incredible entries here!!!

@maureen Thank you so much for your kind words and feedback!

@larry-whitler
Thank you so much for your words of encouragement, you are incredibly kind and sweet!

@lauraa
Thank you so much for the feedback!! I agree with everything you've said here. And i'll definitely check the values in my paintings more...i indeed tend to go overboard with lighting sometimes haha! Thank you again!!

@teju-abiola
Ohh that makes sense! Thank you for pointing that out. I think once I'm ready to start looking for work generated from this portfolio, I'll narrow it down to only the illustrations/wildlife paintings/ whatever job i'm hoping for at the time! Thanks so much for your thoughts!!!

@juliekitzes
Thank you for the feedback! I agree, i think the lion sketch shall be taken out since it was more of a test piece than an actual painting.
And i agree about the bio! The only reason I put my age is because it's such a common thing to do on social media sites like Instagram, but i agree it's not so at home on a portfolio site haha.
I'll see what I can do about the Portfolio tab not working, hopefully that's an easy fix, thanks for pointing it out!!
Thank you so much for your feedback and tips

@kathrynadebayo

Thank you so much! I am so incredibly thankful that I have people in my life who have encouraged me to start take art seriously early in life, I'm sure i would not have done so without them!!
And thank you for the feedback, it has been noted! I have moved down "Hidden" to lower on the page, and i'll watch out for that issue in the future, with some pieces reading better smaller than others.
Thanks so much again!!!

Hello everyone! I was hoping i could get some critique on here that could help me out with my art portfolio website. Here it is: https://botheamelia.wixsite.com/pixus

I feel like there are too many pieces in it and i want to narrow it down a bit! Some pieces are DEFINITELY notably older than others, but I'm having trouble convincing myself to delete them because I am still fond of some of their concepts, just not their execution ("Thriving Autumn" and "Peafowl Fox" are examples of this!) I was hoping some of you could offer your opinions!

I should also note I'm not particularly looking to get hired for anything from this portfolio yet. I simply want to showcase my best pieces on a site other than instagram, haha.

Other critiques are welcome too, such as on the setup of the portfolio page in general or the "Bio" section of it! Thanks so much everyone!! SVS has been very helpful to me so far and I love the community on here

It's such a cool piece! Very interesting and almost creepy style, everything is rendered very nicely. The one thing I notice is the stars are taking away from the focal point (which i'm assuming is the face), they are bright and hard-edged against a dark background so theyre very high contrast and pull your eye away from the face. I suggest darkening them and blurring them a bit so they fall into the background!