So I don’t really enjoy character work because I’m not great at it and don’t practice enough but I really do want to improve at it. I have tried really hard with this character and had posted it to another group and got some feedback the I generally agree with but have no clue how to fix most of it. I have tried to fix some but please if any one could give me advice on how to fix the rest it would be greatly appreciated.
Here is the critique I received
Here is original
And here is revised so far.. I tried to fix the chin area and the eye size but I don’t know how to fix the hair to make it look less wig like as he put it.. and as for the fur it’s the one thing in this drawing I really love and don’t want to change if there is a way to make the rest match it I would rather go that route and honestly I’m not sure how else I would draw a fur lined cloak anyway.
Please help me to fix this I’m really not sure where to go from here