Hey everyone! Having a great time getting to see all these submissions! Here's mine
This is a really cool concept, but at the moment, each piece seems relatively evenly spaced. I think one thing that could improve it, would be to take each piece, and make them spiral downward into the eye of the vortex more like a chain. If each of those items connected the girl to the eye of the vortex then it would add a strong dynamic element to the piece! Love the style!
I really dig the concept and the composition is powerful. I think maybe bringing the moon back to help the violinist stand out more could be cool. Also, if the smoke kind of meandered into the sky that might eliminate the sharp direction it's giving off.