Wizard of Oz: THUMBNAILS - Your Feedback is greatly appreciated!
@cszoltan wow! These are so good!! I’m loving 2 and 4. I like all the character designs too.
@cszoltan my husband says 4. I always like to ask him because he’s not an illustrator so he sees it all differently.
@cszoltan 4 is very appealing to me
@cszoltan Love your drawings! 3 for me - the book is dark and quite violent ...not a fun romp at all in my opinion - 3 has a sense of tension to it that seems appropriate. They are all excellent though!
Heather Boyd last edited by
Hi! Your characters are super hugy adorable - another not real word but (shrug) it works. Because your characters are fab I like 4 but I like how 3 is a more unexpected perspective. My only possible addition for number 3 is maybe have a character -scarecrow popping out of a bush in the back grass or have a green glow silhouette/shadow coming from the bottom towards her. Some element that says Oz more.
JudeKillory last edited by
great character designs, love your cowardly lion. Maybe more full figure thumbnails? i do like 4 but it feels crowded.
I like 2 with Dorothy in a fun gesture and the other characters visible but not prominent. I think having a central composition for a cover works.
Neha Rawat last edited by
I like a mix of 1 and 2. I like Dorothy's movement in 2 and the single line title in 1 (else everything looks too columned).
Your character designs are super! I hope it comes across in this composition
Jonathon B Baker 0 last edited by
I'm really liking 3 and 4. 3 because the composition draws me in and makes me want to know more but I don't think It's immediately obvious that it's Wizard of Oz. Not that that's a bad thing. Just an observation. 4 I like because you know the story immediately and it;s a good intro to the characters. The composition works well too.
cszoltan last edited by
Wow so many great comments, Thank you everyone!!!
I started to clean up nr. 4, it was definitely the most effective of them all.
I will leave it as it is for a couple of hours and start working on something else, and later, with a fresh perspective I will start to paint.
Cant wait to share the process with all of you, Thank you!