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    • NelsonYiap
      NelsonYiap last edited by

      Hi, I'm doing this commission for a friend and wanted to get some feedback on the sketch. Would love to hear your thoughts! Hazel thumb 2.png

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @NelsonYiap last edited by

        Hi @NelsonYiap, are you adding text? There’s a big white space on the left. What’s the story you’re commissioned for?

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        • Neha Rawat
          Neha Rawat last edited by

          @NelsonYiap It's a cute sketch. The characters are fun and expressive. I agree a little insight into the story would help us give better feedback.

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