What are the top 3 things i should focus on?

  • Heya all hope your staying safe out there, i come to you in search of a little criticism on a comicbook i recently finished.

    I'll include a link to download the comicbook for free (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1pKlp8PQMCDgtak7YtQuECsx8W5k0rSSi), what i would ask was if after reading it you could give me your opinion on "The 3 things you think i need to improve on artistically"This could be anything from fundamentals to whatever but take note I didn't try and color this cause that's always something I've been terrible at so I just slapped the grays on.

    I am gearing up to switch to doing more classes as opposed to my usual aimless scribbles so i hope your feedback will help point me towards the major issues that i can try and buckle down on them.

    This comic was for myself to prove to me that I could in-fact take something from script to print but as has been recommended by Jake, and seeing how this all worked out, I plan on focusing on short comics and such in the foreseeable future.

    TL;DR: 3 biggest issues that I can focus on during fundamentals work.

    Thanks for your time!

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