Feedbacks on composition needed, Thank U!
Quick question, for composition only, which one do you think is better? For the better one, any suggestions for further improvement? Hope this illustration is self-explaining in terms of the story behind.
carlianne last edited by
I prefer the second one! It was easier for me to understand the house and tree in that one
I think it looks like rain is coming from the beard off a man or a god? I love the concept! My only thought of things you could try would be to make the god look more special? He looks like a regular guy so maybe his clothes? Or maybe more storytelling? Like it's raining on a ship in a storm?
Or something else that tells us more about your story. I really do love the theme though! Really fun image
@carlianne Ah, Thank you for the suggestion! Yep, I totally agree that the guy's outfit is a bit too normal gonna make it special!
xin li last edited by
I really like the color comp. I also prefer #2.
I agree with @carlianne that placing the scene on ocean with a small ship will be more interesting. The steak and tension will be so much higher.