<![CDATA[A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please?]]>Hello! If anyone has a little time, I'd love your thoughts on what I might do to improve this piece. There are a few things I still plan to do, but I'd gladly hear anything you have to suggest. Thanks so much! hawkins.jpg

]]>https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/900/a-3rd-thursday-critique-pleaseRSS for NodeSat, 07 Mar 2026 02:44:03 GMTThu, 10 Dec 2015 23:17:24 GMT60<![CDATA[Reply to A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please? on Fri, 11 Dec 2015 15:34:32 GMT]]>@Katrina-Fowler Great advice, Katrina! I really appreciate it!

]]>https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9711https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9711Fri, 11 Dec 2015 15:34:32 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please? on Fri, 11 Dec 2015 05:19:17 GMT]]>Hey there. Here are a few observations:

  • Snowman and Mrs. Claus have the same pose and are about the same size. On purpose?

  • Snowman seems a bit lonely in the field by himself...

  • I doesn't read to me that the elves have jet packs on. It just looks like their little bumms were alight.

  • Goggles are a bit dark. They look like welding goggles.

So I did a quick color enhancement to brighten it up a bit - hope you don't mind. Keep at it. You are don't great!

push color.jpg

]]>https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9699https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9699Fri, 11 Dec 2015 05:19:17 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please? on Fri, 11 Dec 2015 04:44:09 GMT]]>Yup. That's what I was going for.

]]>https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9697https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9697Fri, 11 Dec 2015 04:44:09 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please? on Fri, 11 Dec 2015 00:33:43 GMT]]>I think this is a really cute image and I like the feel with the powdery snow, however, the elves look like they are getting set on the line for a football play. Sorry, its a great idea that just what it feels like to me.

]]>https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9682https://forum.svslearn.com/post/9682Fri, 11 Dec 2015 00:33:43 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to A 3rd Thursday Critique, Please? on Thu, 10 Dec 2015 23:49:15 GMT]]>Hi! I really like "powdery" look of this and of course jet packs. I wish they were taking off though. Right now they are bent over with their glowing booties pointed at one another. I'm not trying to be crass. That's just the first thing that I noticed and my mind went there.

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