July challenge WIP, feedback Welcome :-)

  • I LOVE your composition in number 3 😃 Maybe think about flipping it so the characters are running to the right as we move from left to right when we look at books etc!

  • @lenwen thank you for the feedback. I am excited to work on these. Hope I will still have the time to take one of these to finish before the end of the month 🙂
    @LauraA thank you. I considered doing No.4. but I am not sure if it fits the contest title very well. It lack a clear storytelling device to say "vacation". I struggle to come up with something to make the concept complete. :-). For now, it feels like a half baked idea, but I am very much in love with it to let it go.
    @hannahmccaffery good point. Most of us are aiming to do books, or doing books. I guess it is really more natural to have the character running from left to right.

    I guess the theme for these set of images are inspired by Shaun Tan's book "Rule of Summer". Recently, I started reading another of his book The Bird King - an artist's notebook. One thing he wrote in this book that really stays with me "A drawing feels successful to me when it is both clear and ambiguous..." I am hoping to take one of these ideas to that place: both clear and ambiguous.

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    I like the composition of 3 but the story in 1. Maybe play with a different point in time with the first -but I do like it.

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    Thanks for all the feedback. It was very helpful. Finally got around to make some progress. I went for no. 1 idea, felt it was most completed idea to proceed.

    Any thoughts?

  • @xin-li Niiiiiiiice 😃

    I kinda wanna see a freshly-caught fish hangin' off the fishing pole to really give those other fish a reason to pose a threat and give that feeling of 'looming danger'. (That was a LOT of fish for one sentence...)

    I'm really likin' it so far!

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    @xin-li Very cool take on the prompt. I really love the dreamlike quality you captured!

  • Some progress so far. I could spend another day to fiddle with the fishes. But I got like 1 hour more to call it done for now. Now I wish I started it earlier, so I could sit on this piece for a couple days and come back later. svs_july contest_02.jpg

    @Braden-Hallett thanks for the feedback. I know what you mean about having a fresh caught fish. I went without, partly because I wanted to stay a bit more ambiguous, and partly because I ran out of time to test it out :-).

    @Erin-Cortese Thanks for the encouragement.

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    @xin-li this looks beautiful

  • @xin-li This is awesome 😃 . I love the wall-eyed stare of the fish in the upper left corner 🙂

  • @Nyrryl-Cadiz @Braden-Hallett thank you. I posted the final in the July contest thread. The color got a bit muddy. Might need to sit in this piece for some time before I can tweak the color to get it right.

    This was fun. Now I think I need some SVS videos about how to use sophisticated color without getting muddy. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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