Group run through creative environment design week 6 art and feedback
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@Heather-Boyd I like far right one the best too
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@Heather-Boyd Very cool.
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Colour is still a thorn in my side
, I would love some feedback on these colour studies. Which one works better? Are my values ok? These are just the local colours, no highlights or shadows included.
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@Erin-Cortese Colour's a thorn in all sides.
I'm partial to option 1. It gives a nice sense of moonlight. If you really dial up the warm light behind the clock it would make a nice warm contrast in all the cool.
I'm less partial to option 2. The red's nice and cool, but it makes me feel like there's a big ol' spotlight somewhere off camera.
I think the values are working fine
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@Erin-Cortese I agree with @Braden-Hallett both in that color is also my Achilles heel and also that #1 is my favorite. It feels more unified and sets a nice mood.
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@Erin-Cortese I also like the first one. Colors are harmonious.
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this is worthy of slowvember! slowly picking away.......opacity turned down but I am reinforcing lines and re-drawing things, mostly things on top and right hand side are re-done at this point. slow and I feel like a pain posting it in a way but it makes me feel like I am making SOME sort of progress..........dealing with a busy life and kids studying for finals and I am having some eye strain lately that is a real pain in the butt for getting this sort of work done
Will keep picking away at it.
I intended the horse to be a regular horse (went from horse to unicorn back to horse) but now I wonder once I sketched it and you could see the lines of the window through the horse if it might be fun to play around with the horse being a dream (translucent/see though) .........so I will toy with that.
and yeah I guess I am putting characters in an environmental final lol but I thought that's eventuallly where I am going so am plowing ahead with that -
@Coley Nothin' wrong with working on a thing slowly
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@Braden-Hallett thanks!
