• SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG

    Hey everyone, sorry for the delay. I've been neck deep in a really tricky new book project and am just now coming up for some air! Whew!

    And what a breath of fresh air it is! Your work for the contest is lovely and I spent a lot of time pouring over the images. This topic is a tricky one. It's hard not to be too cliche' with the subject matter because we have been saturated with overly sentimental images for years and years. I think you guys did a good job of putting a new spin on a very well traveled topic.

    I noticed a lot of new entries and I want to really encourage all of you new faces here. You are doing great! We had over 80 entries this month so I really had to sit with the images for a bit to see how they held up over to multiple viewings. I think I've managed to narrow it down to our winners and honorable mentions.

    in terms of what didn't make it, here's how it broke down:

    • Concept being overly sentimental images or cliche': Even though many of them were sweet, just painting two people/characters interacting didn't have enough originality to win.. (still nice images though!). Need to have some kind of new twist on that to do well here.

    • Technique: I saw a lot of good ideas where the execution wasn't quite there yet. Keep at it, this part is the easiest to fix.

    Now on to the Winners:

    1st Place: PETE OLCZYK @peteolczyk
    Gorgeous painting here in our top spot. Great concept and absolute control in color and light. The beauty here is there is actually a LOT of detail in this, but it's all controlled so well it looks simple and sweet. Great job Pete.

    2nd Place: ERIN CORTESE @inkandspatter
    I love Erin's concept here. It's so funny and spot on. This is a nice way to take a cliche' idea (like giving flowers to a valentine) and to spin in and make it new. The cool blue palette is a nice choice here. Keep it up Erin!

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    3rd Place: EVA ELLER @Eva-Eller
    Eva's piece this month is SO COOL and very unexpected. I love the editorial take on the subject and we can read so many stories into what is taking place here. Nice use of silhouette and scale. This is how it's done folks!


    Runners up (in no particular order): Note: I thought I might offer some light suggestions here if that is ok. These suggestions are not guaranteed to make it better, but it's a place I would start if I was working with these artists in a classroom setting.

    NIKI STAGE Really sweet image that is expertly done. If I had to offer some advice here, I might like to see this palette and value keyed to a blue to simulate a night scene.

    JOHANNA KIM @Johanna-Kim : Johanna has been in a contender in almost every contest and this one is no exception. Really great. Especially if this is traditional watercolor (it looks like it is). The only crit I'd have here is the glass between the characters isn't reading at all and sort of needs to be read a little quicker. There is a number of ways to pull this off (try in photoshop first to make sure it looks good, then add to final piece).

    JESS ERSKINE: @CrunchyBunny Nice looking nigh scene here by Jess. this light and color are gorgeous. Everything seems to be working really well here so it's hard to think of anything I'd add here. The way to make this scene have more interest could be to play with what is happening with the characters. Right now they are saying hi, which is sweet, but we probably need to add some kind of tension there to add interest. This could be making the main character seem like he is struggling to get home. Or he is cold, etc. But that is getting nit picky. This is a great image.

    NADYA BONTEN @nadyart
    Pretty and sad image by Nadya and I really love all the stylizations going on here. Nice take on the topic too. Only thing I would suggest is possibly some different composition studies. Right now our main character is too centered and I think it could be very interesting to move it off center. Note: square formats are VERY tricky because it wants to make you put things in the center...


    LI XIN @xin-li
    This is really a sweet piece that adds a nice twist to the Love theme. I love the color balance and characters here. My suggestions would be to think about detail hierarchy. What that basically means is figuring out what the image is about and emphasize that and dial the other detail back. Right now we have the star constellation (which is the real focal point), and then we have the shooting stars which distract from our focal point. And then there are the lightning bugs too. So basically if we calm that other stuff down, the intent of the image will come out a bit more.


    BRADEN JALLETT @Braden-Hallett
    This is a fantastic concept and pulled off quite nicely. The mark making and design are pro level for sure. My only suggestion is similar to what I said in the previous piece. We need to control where the eye goes a little more and that can be done with value and contrast control (Will Terry is a pro at this). If you squint, you will see that the fridge is one of the first thins we look at due to it's light value. I think if the rest of the scene was toned down some with a soft glaze over everything except our focal point, it might resonate a little more. Still, you did an amazing job Braden.

    ASH WEAVER @Ash-Weaver
    Really cool retro styled image here. I really love the design of this piece and the attention to detail. The storytelling is great and builds nicely as you roam around the image. It's hard to offer suggestions here because it's so well done, but I might want to see some other sketches to try to get more attitude on the character. Something as simple as tilting her head up can do wonders for giving a character a bit more personality.


    This is some stunning character design here. Great control of value and hue as well. The concept is great and I really love it. The only snag for me here was the tall character in between our two love birds. She looks out of place in the image and her expression isn't as well crafted as everyone else. I think just lowering here down in the composition and working on her mouth area would solve the problems there. Amazing job though. That's a lot of characters! : )

    Before we go, I wanted to offer a moment of silence for a loss we had in our SVS family. Rich Cartwright passed away last month and it hit us all really hard. Rich was a constant presence on the forum and a great guy. He will be missed. I really loved this image Rich did for one of our contests: Screen Shot 2019-03-11 at 5.36.30 PM.png

    Okay everyone, that's gonna do it for now. Keep up all your hard work. It's paying off and the work keeps getting better and better. If you are struggling, just try to get a little better each day and it's amazing what you can accomplish. I can't wait to see your book covers next month!


  • Congrats to all of the winners and mentions! So much great art submitted.

  • @Lee-White

    Sweet! Runner up! Thanks Lee 🙂 and thank you for the feedback!

    Congrats to the winners! It's always neat to see which ones come out on top.

  • SVS OG

    Congrats to all winners--excellent and inspiring work! And congrats also to the runner-up artists, and to everyone that took the time and effort to submit. I saw many wonderful concepts and expressions of love. @Lee-White thank you for the added critique notes for the runner-up pieces--very helpful and will definitely try to improve mine.

  • Thanks @Lee-White for going through all those! Congrats to the winners

  • @Lee-White What lovely and inspiring work. And Lee’s critiques are so kind and spot on. I learned something from each of those pieces and Lee’s suggestions. Thank you.

  • SVS OG

    Congrats to everybody! Lots of really nice pieces here. It was a great topic to work with!

  • SVS OG

    @Lee-White You chose some amazing pieces and each so different. Thanks for providing the comments that let us all in on what to work toward.
    Maureen BF

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    Thank you very much, placing in the top three was a big surprise! Also, thank you to everyone on the forum who offered feedback and advice on my composition, it was a big help!

  • Thanks @Lee-White for taking the time to do all this and give critique. You're awesome.

  • SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG

    @avfarrar my pleasure! I love seeing all the work you guys do!

  • Fantastic work. Well done. Really like seeing all the stuff people make. Been chuckling at the faces on those seagulls. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

  • Congratulations everybody! It must have been so hard to pick the winners and runner ups because I think they all look so good!! (happy not to stand in Lee's shoes this time :p). And thank you for the critique @Lee-White Even though I didn't participate, I learned so much from it.

  • @Braden-Hallett your stuff is always great to see.

  • There were some amazing entries this month! Glad to see some of my favorites here. Congratulations everybody!

  • Congratulations to all the winners!

  • The art submitted for this competition was incredible. I loved seeing everyone's work. Great job to all, and congratulations to the winners and honorable mentions.

  • Thank you @lee-white
    I feel very honoured and very surprised. I really enjoyed seeing all the amazing different interpretations and discovering new artists. There’s such a positive community on here, everyone supports each other. Well done everyone and congratulations!

  • Congratulations @peteolczyk! Your illustration is beautiful!
    I’m very happy to be mentioned, thank you for the crit @Lee-White, I appreciate it a lot!

  • Congratulations to the winners! These look great!

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