My BIG prompt - does anyone have any suggestions?

  • @nyrrylcadiz @NessIllustration You're both so right, this seems to be one of my problems at the moment. I get so caught up with my illustrations and get anxious, that I overwork them and want them to be 100% realistic, when, like you say, they don't need to be!

    Haha @NessIllustration I have the same problem with my boyfriend too, he doesn't realise that illustration can be whatever the creator wants and comments on how "this doesn't look real" etc, so I blame him! hehe! I'm going to try your approach of getting him to back off!

    I will have a play around tonight with it, thank you both so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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    @NessIllustration oh no he di-int!!!๐Ÿ˜‚

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    @hannahmccaffery I love this. Iโ€™m a big sucker for anything monster or Halloween and I love the boy in this! For me the boy has such great colouring and tone, and fits the scene perfect. The monster on the other hand doesnโ€™t read that way to me, it almost feels like he was plopped in from another scene with totally different lighting. I just feel like his colouring doesnโ€™t blend with the scene.

  • @inkandspatter no you're totally right, I think that's what I just couldn't put my finger on! It's that damn monster haha! Compared to the boy, maybe he's too bright and colourful and I need to add more blues to tone him down a bit?

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    @hannahmccaffery Yes, I think toning down the brightness and using cooler colours would make a huge difference! Try putting your hand over the monster so that you can only see the boy and the background. Then remove your hand and the colours that are not working on the monster should stand out more. Thatโ€™s how I saw it. It so nice when the problem finally reveals itself ๐Ÿ™‚

  • @inkandspatter Good idea, I'll do that thank you!

  • Oh man! I love this piece!

  • @ThisKateCreates thank youuuu! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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    @hannahmccaffery This is an exciting piece and beautifully rendered with the shapes, poses, expressions, and drama. I suggest desaturating and lighting up some of the colors (which I think some other folks have suggested?) as it's feeling a bit too dark. The light source coming from the monster's mouth is cool and helps with the lighting on the boy. Maybe you can increase the lighting on the boy's face (have the light spread a bit around his face more). You might also have the monster's eyes glow? I guess I'm wishing there was more light on the right side of the illustration. Right now it reads that the light is coming from the mid-bottom-left, but somehow the monster is blocking any light from spreading past his girth:) to the right. Also, and this is a tiny note, the monster's spittle read as feathers to me at first. It would be great if you could make it read more clearly. Looking forward to seeing how this develops. It doesn't need much, though.

  • @Johanna-Kim Thank you so much for your reply Johanna, you're right it is looking too dark and like you and others have suggested, the lighting needs reworking so I think i'm going to move it and add some shadows behind the two characters or something. It's actually not like coming from the monsters mouth haha, but I've had other people think that too so I definitely need to redo that - I'm still not used to working with lighting! Noted about the feathers, I'll look at that again ๐Ÿ™‚ thanks you again!

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