Rain or Shine it's Mushroom time! (WIP)
rcartwright last edited by rcartwright
The first one looks very static and stiff because of the vertical angle the second one looks much better but maybe consider an animal that doesn't like to be wet like a mouse purely for story purposes
Braden Hallett last edited by
I like the premise of the first one. But I think the second one is better executed.
I'm not sure where I would begin to alter the first one...
@artwithashley i like the second one because of the characters, it has more story to it.
I like the second one too because the mushroom umbrella made me laugh.
bnewman last edited by
@artwithashley Number two! Looking really good. I struggle with lighting so looking forward to seeing this one. It's a bit different.
TessaW last edited by
I like both, but the second one is definitely more dynamic. It puts you smack-dab in the middle of a story. What's interesting is that even though the mushroom building in the second one isn't as elaborate and it's proportionally very small in relation to the frog, it's the one I feel that I want to enter the most, because I can sympathize with the frog.
It would be interesting to see the first image thumb-nailed in different light and color moods. What would it look like if you made it a nights scene, with the windows and doors glowing, and a traveler in the foreground, or a rainy scene, like your second image?
I'd go with the one that's most exciting to you and that would enhance your portfolio best, as I think both images are pretty strong.
Miriam last edited by
@artwithashley Just reading your text, I was already liking the rain idea, and then I scrolled down & Oh! that frog is great! I also think the composition is much more interesting in the rain sketch.
lenwen last edited by
I like the one with frog better! it has more story on it. But maybe to add even more story, how if in the mushroom house there's another frog or character (maybe fairy? or tiny guy, etc) open the door? so it seems the frog is waiting in the rain outside just arrive from somewhere or he wants to meet someone. I like your composition and idea anyway. Looking so much forward to see more!
artwithashley last edited by
Well it's decided, you guys are all awesome. I really appreciate your feedback and help. I think that the first idea may have to be revisited at a later time. I think having a bridge leading toward the viewer, and possibly a traveler in the foreground like @TessaW mentioned. But I think it will need more work and time then I currently have for this piece.
So it looks like frog in the rain wins this round. I think he will be holding the umbrella for a tiny mouse or bunny friend, who is less fond of getting wet. Maybe, up the scale of the mushroom door so they could actually fit inside. Should be fun to see how it all comes together.
Miriam last edited by
@artwithashley Well, just because he likes to swim in the water, doesn't mean he likes being rained on!
Gary Wilkinson last edited by
+1 for the 2nd scene. I think the composition looks great and the scene reads really well. If you are going to add another character one thought that came to mind is perhaps he is holding it out for the creature coming out of the house as though is it for a dear friend, or even a first date.
Be careful with the mushrooms in the back so that they don't cause the umbrella the frog is holding to blend in too much with them. I like their angles but you could probably do to vary them slightly.
Looks like it will develop into a lovely piece though