3rd Thursday September
gvoona last edited by
this is my sketch for 3rd Thursday September
any suggestions or ideas
Shams Nelson last edited by
Nice sketch! You really captured the movement well and it reads easily. The one thing I would say is that I feel it is missing something... Another element of interest would be nice, perhaps in the bottom left corner as that seems to be the biggest empty space in the composition. Maybe a croc in the water? Or a monkey on a vine above him... Or both. Just an idea!
Kevin Longueil last edited by
@gvoona This looks really good - I think @Shams-Nelson makes a good point - it could be as simple a two crocodile eyes poking out of the pond and looking incredulously at the unfortunate Thomas - you could crop in a bit instead but i like the addition of a story element too - or not it really is a nice drawing!
Rebecca Hirsch last edited by
I love the perspective and the drama in this one. I agree with the others, I think it needs one more story element. Since the prompt says "Thomas could almost reach it" - I think I would like to know what he is trying to get to on that vine.