Help needed with composition
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Hi rabbits,
I have this idea in my head of a kitten going on his first hunt with his mom, finding out he's horrified to eat a mouse. The mouse is unsuspecting enjoying a book in the grass. Im struggling with the mother cat to have the feel she's jumping the mouse from behind. Tried different versions, this seems best of the bad bunch, but it doesnt feel right. Is she too big? Not well positioned? How can i get this a cross better?
Thanks a lot!! Chantal
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And is this too scary for kids? My husband said death is too near in this drawing.
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@Chantal-Goetheer I think having the picture be before the action, where the cat is creeping up would be better than having the image be the action, just to be less scary but also because the mouse isn’t scared because they haven’t noticed yet
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@kayleenartlover yes great idea! Will try that one. Thanks!
