Feedback on a few pages of the dummy I've been trying to finish up please

  • SVS OG

    I've been working on this off and on for quite while. I did things backwards and forwards and done a lot of erasing and redoing. I think the composition has improved. This is my own project to publish on a small scale for friends and family, I think but, I still want to do it as if it was a "real" book 🙂 These are the first three pages. Can you tell me if the composition is working? Thanks.!ticktock1.jpg ticktock2.jpg ticktock3.jpg

  • I really like your mice, I think they are really cute!!! I think your composition is great... It really look like a children's book! 🙂

  • SVS OG

    @Odré Thank you! I hope so!

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