Need Help with Type - Book Cover - Personal Project
KathrynAdebayo last edited by
So nice! It looks like she could be looking at a reflection of herself in the bubble. I think the text tweaks have paid off and it looks more balanced and professional.
I think you nailed it. It looks beautiful!
Hi guys! I think this is finished for me.
Hi guys. Quick vote. which title do you prefer A or B?
Kim Rosenlof last edited by
@Nyrryl-Cadiz I like the fish one. I saw the hook as the letter J. I like that you used an icon for the space in the O. I would face the fish the opposite way and looking up to the right more so that has a more positive feeling to it.
Melissa_Bailey last edited by
@Nyrryl-Cadiz definitely B. More friendly, less ominous without the fishhook.
I agree that B is better. The fish hook is as @Melissa-Bailey-0 said, "ominous."
carlianne last edited by
@Nyrryl-Cadiz I like the fishy too!
For the font though I still find your name a little hard to read.
Since you're name isn't part of the title I think you can make it smaller / not the same width as the text above. It'll help it feel like it's own entity and The "nyr" part of your name is hard to read over the busy dark green leaves anyway.
Jacy13 last edited by
@Nyrryl-Cadiz I also agree that B looks better to me!
Tristan Lapetz last edited by
@Nyrryl-Cadiz I'm with B as well, A is a little too ominous for the joyful vibe of the rest of the scene.
@Kim-Rosenlof @Melissa-Bailey-0 @demotlj @carlianne @Jacy13 @Tristan-Lapetz Thank you so much for the feedback, everyone! I totally see what you mean, tho I must admit, 'ominous' is actually what I was going for. lolz
However, I gave it some thought and I've decided not to use either. I just feel that both are not up to snuff. I know I can come up with something better but I think I've just had it with this piece for now. I don't wanna work on it anymore. I just want it to be done.
I hope y'all don't hate me for wasting your time.
@carlianne Thank you so much for the note on my name. That's definitely something I'd never even think of. Here it is below. This is probably my last edit on this piece unless I deceide otherwise. lolzzz
Again Thank you so much, everyone!!!!