WIP - Ink Fairy - The Fairy company
Jordi Ventura last edited by Jordi Ventura
Hi, there is my work in progress on the monthly contest.
Any feedback is very wellcome!
The idea of the illustration: is about the modernization of the Fairy Industry to make wishes. When centurys ago a Fairy made whises true here and there, becouse she felt it and she wanted it, now in these days of the modern society everything had become and industry or a company. Also the whole business of whises! that push and stress fairys to make whises comes true!
so...Is the illustration macthing the idea? Any suggestions on the drawing, composition or values?
Also, Im unsure on what direction take in that illustration
Option 1: only one character, she is in the office cheking mails, and you can see the logo of the company in the background, maybe I can add a more stuff in the back to make it more like an office.
Option 2: She has another fairy behind, looking at her in a bossy way (drawing and character design still need some work! ), its cool, it add more story to the illustration, but maybe is to much things? I saw that usually I put to much information on the illustrations. I will like to make them more "empty" and have more space. But then I see option A an maybe something is lacking, I dont know! can you enlighten me?
@Jordi-Ventura i love option 2. it has more story. i think the clutter and lack of space helps convey the feeling of claustrophobia, unease and chaos. it completely fits the mood in my opinion
Gary Wilkinson last edited by
@Jordi-Ventura I think the concept is going somewhere but I don't think it fits with the provided text