@chrisaakins
I think this is both interesting and has great variety in paneling! The images compliment the text to enhance the story very well.
For panel 1: We might want to see both characters. I didn't realize there were 2 people until panel 3, so it was a little bit disorienting (unless this is just a page out of a larger comic)
I have no idea how to show a door imploding LOL but you could always show it from the other POV if you feel like it's not working?
I personally treat the art for comics as full pages and if possible as spreads. That way I can make sure it is working compositionally as a whole, and not just each individual panel.