Ok So I changed the composition to feature more diagonal lines, showing the chaos, made one goose the main focus and grandma a second read, and changed her water gun to a gun that catapaults tiny yappy dogs( this came about when I got input from the family 😜)
Notes on add’l changes:
-move the mailbox(right bottom corner?)
-apply rule of thirds to main goose so maybe crop right side or rework shot/sidewalk
-change the goose in the top right corner to be flying out to the right. redistribute group of three goose on left so middle one is running off the page show a dog hopping up onto grandma’s gun
Looking to get feedback on what does and doesn’t work.
Thank you everyone for your time and input!