I haven't posted for ages. How about this one? ;-)
cool comic!:-) you got my vote ;-)
@pam-boutilier Cool story!:-) I am not sure how much I can help you. However it feels like it could be good to add some reflections close to white basis on the fact you have white sparkly things in the bowl. I would try to make it more sparkly i guess.
@box-head I like it. It's dynamic and interesting. However I am not sure about red hand in the front. It's grabbing a lot of attention. If it's digital illustration, maybe consider getting rid to give the lady some space to run? If it's traditional try to take some red off. Anyway, it's cool and smth different :)
@late2theparty I really like the way you have drawn and coloured octopus sandwich. However I am not sure of rendering on the boy and the background. It feels like there is too much color there and takes focus from the sandwich. It could be also difference in texture, which is nice on the sandwich but almost flat on the rest of drawing. You are close to very cool drawing tho! :-)
@stringfellowart new version looks interesting :-) However I like the idea of @Gary-Wilkinson to add a few other Octopuses hiding in shelfs. I think it can really make it a great piece. Also you should probably make the aquarium bigger. Perhaps give her a trolly to tow it around while she is looking for Octopus?? just an idea ;-)
@lisa-ngan It's a nice illustration :-) However (leave it or take it;) I am wondering, whether girl's dad is too close to the right side of the pic (?). Concerning colors, I am rubbish with color choices so will not try to advice.
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