Poe entry



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    Feedback please. I see some problems of my own bI probably should have redone it but....have at it, please.



  • I don't know anything about watercolors, but your Poe character and your bird are very good. I like your style! I think it probably needs cleaning up a bit and maybe some work with the title. Others will give you a lot more feedback that will be more specific to help you. Great start though!



  • I think it's awesome you're using watercolors! I plan to try it out in the near future.

    For my feedback, I think being more dramatic with values could go a long way. For example, using a darker value the further down the hole you go so that there is an even greater sense of depth. And varying the values on the hill to give it a sense of "hilliness". Hope this helps :)



  • Thanks! I see what you mean -both of you. I think if I used better paper I could have darkened the colors more too. I also would redo the hand with the pen in it if I were to redraw it. Someday I will learn to do things digitally..at least enough to fix them up. Thanks again! I'll work on it again later since it's already in. Next time I'll know to come here first and get feedback ahead of time :-)



  • I think I would like it better if the dark and dreary part were higher up near the top. The placement is a bit off (I could have fixed that digitally too...ugh! ) So much to learn :-)


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