My draw 50 things WIP
Jon Anderson last edited by
This is looking great! It may just be me, but the tile lines on the floor seem a bit off. They work well with the boy but feel off when looking at the popcorn stand and the shelves behind the boy. I like the direction and look forward to seeing more!
evilrobot last edited by
Think I'm calling it finished now
NoWayMe last edited by
@evilrobot Very good work!!! I think you nailed it! The only thing that is bugging me is what @Sarah-LuAnn pointed out... I think you are loosing a lot of storytelling by just having the guy standing there. Maybe he could be looking at his watch, exasperated that the boy is taking so long to decide what he wants ? Otherwise, great work!
aska last edited by
Sweet:-) I feel like eating some candy now ;-)
JeaneBean last edited by
All I have to say is that this is A M A Z I N G. Such great work!
Jake Parker last edited by
Solid work! @Will-Terry should be proud.
Kevin Longueil last edited by
@evilrobot Really nice work William!!
Randy Smith last edited by
Really nice work. I love how you placed the main character in a pool of light. Good job!
Eric Castleman last edited by
@evilrobot this is really good!!! High level skill ;-)
Lee White last edited by
great looking scene here. Good looking line work and detail. One thing though, your 3rd vanishing point lines are all over the place. Make sure that 3rd point is far away and make sure everything goes to that point. Right now everything is drawn so well that the angles on that are really throwing it off.
Can't wait to see this finished!