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It was great taking part in the spring critique. Thank you @Will-Terry and @Lee-White. I learned so much not only from my critique, but watching everyone else's as well. I reworked this piece which is a 2-page spread for 3rd Thursday using the fortune: A new voyage will fill your life with untold memories.
I posted the before and after. Would love feedback on the direction this is taking. Thanks!!!