Finally got around to making changes after 3rd Thurs critique...
A few months ago my piece was a runner up in the 3rd Thursday competiton, but only recently have I been able to come back to the piece and apply the suggested changes. (The holidays take lots of time, its crazy.) Here is the new and improved version.
Charlie Eve Ryan
@Sarah-LuAnn So lovely Sarah! The whole thing works really well and I just love the animals, the plane and the concept!!
nicely done Sarah