@eric-castleman I think it reads more like a marshmallow now that it's shortened. You might try squishing the shape a little with some indentations of where it was held by the fingers to force it on the poker. Not necessary, just a suggestion to see if you like how it fits with the piece. Also, I personally think the baldness is fine but having some wacky mad scientist hair on the side could potentially make for some good storytelling. I like how the piece is coming along, thanks for sharing your progress.
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